Second pass at session 7.
Wow! I got lots of feedback regarding my session 7 assignment. This is one of the strongest points of AM people! Feedback on how your assignment could be improved upon from people of different backgrounds and varied experiences. It's one of the most important tools when learning to be an animator.
Back on track here, the general consensus was that my anticipation and landing were very linear. So I'm trying to get some nice arcs in there to get a more dynamic motion out of them. Below is the second revision of this week's assignment. Feel free to leave feedback if you so desire. ;)
3 Comments:
Hi Freddie,
nice one, some ideas I got while watching it. 1. Watch the angle at which he is lifting off the ground. It seems that he must lean even more forward to reach the angle for that huge jump. Next thing is when you land and try to manage that huge amount of energy you should definitely lift his heel of the ground and back again. Right now he sticks to the ground like glue after landing. I would suggest to add 10-15 more frames to make his stop believable. Other than that everything looks very solid =)
I hope that helps you a littlebit.
- Alex
Hey Freddie,
I thing you can probably do is to to quicken the take off. You have frames 11 - 15 for your takeoff: try shrinking that timing by half an see if it works for you.
good luck!
Thanks for the awesome feedback! I really appreciate it and it definitely helped me out!
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